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Coffee and Castles in the sky: an excerpt PDF Print E-mail
Written by Pooja Dhar   
Sunday, 02 November 2008
First SnowHi all...
Working on a book now...here's an excerpt. Tell me what you think. Chapter 1!
By the way, ami chat er shei Pooja...pagolmeye/ishhh_bairipiya... :)

One second. That’s all it takes to change a life forever. That’s all it took to change mine. I had always thought of the concept of love at first sight to be ludicrous, an exaggerated version of lust. But today, a day that started out like any other would make me a believer, make me see that it is possible to fall in love with just one look. 

I took a tentative sip from my steaming mocha at the corner café, grasping the thick ceramic mug to thaw my icy hands. Looking around at the busy street through the glass, I savored the taste of chocolate and espresso in my mouth, feeling a strange sense of calm. The pleasant smells of coffee, muffins and woodsy cigar smoke wafted over from the kind-faced elderly gentleman sitting at the next table. I shivered a little in my thick woolen jacket, breath steaming in the wintry air, watching people trudge through shoveled and salted sidewalks with snow piled high on either side. And then, I saw him.

He walked up in blue jeans and a gray sweater, ruffling the snowflakes out of his hair. With a half-smile as if he’d just thought of something amusing, he looked in my direction. My heart thudded against my chest.  He smiled a little wider and I felt my cheeks grow warm even as I hoped against hope that my rising color wouldn’t show through my brown skin. I lowered my eyes, then, and when I looked up he was at the counter placing his order. A Mocha. Was it a sign? I grabbed the opportunity to closely observe his handsome face, the beautiful dark hair that I had longed to be the one running my fingers through, eyes the color of milk chocolate, the smooth jaw line...he turned just that instant, catching me in the act and I flushed, smiling guiltily, wishing I could gather up the courage to walk up to him and say something to stop him from leaving. At that very moment of course, my cell phone rang, snapping me out of my reverie. Annoyed, I told my mother I would call her later about how many pinches of cumin went in my chicken curry. Putting my phone away in exasperation, I looked around. He was gone. I could have wept. But then I heard a voice behind me, and it could only have been him. That deep husky voice could only belong to a certain man with warm brownie eyes. “Is this seat taken?”

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sandy - Nice piece of writing :-) Publisher | 2008-11-09 18:27:39
Wish I cud be the man in gray sweater
tintin Publisher | 2008-11-09 18:01:09
Well sounds like very imaginative but keep the good job! I will be waiting fr your next job to let us know if you were able to date that hunk!
Soumya Rudra - Serendipity IP:72.92.98.103 | 2008-11-09 21:03:15
If you believe in serendipity,you can certainly make me a believer.
Grey lines,deliberate mellifluous descriptions,never pithy about caressing the thoughts with ornate moments.
The question that will obviously liner in our minds simmering above the aroma of cigarette smoke and monotony drenched exhaustion is ...what next?
royrado - wow Registered | 2008-11-11 20:48:53
after readin this...i feel like sayin, "Lets fall in love all over again"
sandy - I agree with you, royrado... : Publisher | 2008-11-11 20:57:08
No reason why do not we start falling in love again Kidding
royrado - hhmm Registered | 2008-11-11 20:58:10
i meant fall in love with the same person but in a cold winter morning with hot coffee and smoke kinda situation...
sandy - Doesnt matter even with differ Publisher | 2008-11-11 21:03:13
As long you do not hurt anyone, you can always(from a distance)when such place and ambiance is present
royrado - u dint understand Registered | 2008-11-11 21:06:02
well u didnt understand...i said the same person..so no qstn of hurting anyone..only the situation has to an ultra-romantic like the one mentioned above....
sandy - I justified my comment... Publisher | 2008-11-11 21:09:38
M not trying to prove you wrong instead I have only justified my point...so we can all relax now
Parna Editor | 2008-11-12 09:25:34
Oh my God...am i dreaming or does that really happened...Whatsoever the whole description was really really romantic...I can view it,i can feel it..Keep up the good work Pooja.. ...It something like meeting your man in dreams Mere Khwabo Mein jo Aye..Eagerly waiting for your next article..
poojadhar82 - Re: Author | 2008-11-15 20:37:17
Hi all, thanks for the wonderful comments...and for the curious ones- the man in the gray sweater is real!
Joe Sat - biri_piya IP:220.225.6.189 | 2008-11-15 20:49:26
its nice pooja....u r working fine..carry on..hope u'll not mind if i call u biri_piya..
tintin Publisher | 2008-11-15 21:42:00
Well, I do not believe in such romantic cases unless I see such things which only happens in Movies. I believe in love but it should be unconditional and where there is true love.. I believe I have never seen such cases happening there. The authors is an exceptional and I am curious that if this has turned out to be true love?
poojadhar82 - Re:Tintin Author | 2008-11-15 21:50:59
Hi Tintin,

I guess you can call me an eternal romantic. I've felt and experienced true love...but I do have a practical streak and do not believe unconditional love exist. Conditions are always there obvious or not. But yes, this love is true!
tintin - @Pooja Publisher | 2008-11-15 22:09:23
Yes..love has conditions but I have also seen unconditional love. But today's situation has changed everything in some robotic manner of love, where money stands between the lovers.
sandy - Love = Money = Love !!! Publisher | 2008-11-15 22:30:56
I do not know how far I am right saying that money matters. But in todays date without money love has very less space and importance. Even if I consider the so called unconditional divine love between a mother and her child, I would still say money matters then love. Its rare and can be called exception if I am wrong, and exception does not make rule
Shayoni Registered | 2008-11-15 23:00:14
Sandy, I agree with you in this matter that Love matters where money lies. Every relation has some default condition where money plays a big factor - even in parent and child relationship too! Man and woman, regardless of their status, age or any geographical location, are certified as good or bad based on their wealth. A woman, though a wife might give many sacrifices for her family, will be considered productive only if she could add some money. A woman is also treated based on how much money she brings after marriage as dowry or whatever way she can. Some might look for a girl who comes from wealthy family or guy who are rich and wealthy. Or else no one would have got ditched based on status or money!
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